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Submitted: September 16, 2012
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Twilight Rageby *Dori-to

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Comics / Strips

It is my birthday today and this is my birthday gift from me to all my fans!

I'd like to thank everyone who has supported me over the past months and THANKS to everyone who wished me a happy birthday today.

Here are the art presents I got: [link]

Special thanks to the tacohat crew

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They're awesome, so go and watch them!

Critique by ~monstermaniac202 Sep 21, 2012, 10:08:40 PM

it needs a more extreme coffee table flip. its just to gentle. try the flame hair and tail. with steam out the nose. that would be an awesome coffee table flip. and try adding in one more column with a gentle glow of the horn, and then the rage after the table appeared. that would be awesome. also the shading is kinda throwing me off a little bit. i can quite tell where the light is coming from. but every thing is amazing very very good show. and twilight looks twilightlious. and thank you for taking in my opinion. i like it a lot.

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Critique by *pj202718 Sep 17, 2012, 3:32:46 AM

Vision: What we're looking at is a rather typical example of what drove the plot forward in "Feeling Pinkie Keen". As was the case then, we have someone who thinks that she's methodical clashing with someone who won't explain how she does all those weird things. The result is that the more rigid one loses her composure.

Originality: It might be an old joke but given the humorous nature of the piece, old seems to fit.

Technique: The artwork and the closing sight gag both help sell the premise: "Twilight blows her stack because Pinkie succeeds by being random when she failed by being what she only thinks is being methodical."

Impact: The in-strip impact is another letter to Celestia about how the ponies are crazy and are driving her to drink. The real world impact is me laughing a bit at someone silly's expense.