omg did derpy died? lol just kidding i like the way you drew the pool but it seems it looks like an ocean the splash yeah thats big enough but it doesnt looks like a splash to me it looks like a giant clam and the rainboom its bigger than that in the picture in the background of the last panel can it be more bluer? because it looks like the sun is eating equestria rainbowdash's wings yes very elegant but her wings are not exactly like that! where are the clouds? this is marvelous work dori-to very nice work indeed
I love the way you did Rainbow, and you get the idea that she is a very competitive pony.
The sonic rain-boom shows the impact that the big splash has on the pool.
I never imagined that Derpy would make such a big splash, because she is usually a very clumsy pony
I love it. I like the style you included and the detail of both the manes of the mares when in water. Also, the silhouette of Derpy shows that she, excuse the pun, was blown away. Love it
(This is my first Critique, so please don't hate Thanks )
i like the way you drew the pool but it seems it looks like an ocean
the splash yeah thats big enough but it doesnt looks like a splash to me it looks like a giant clam and the rainboom its bigger than that in the picture
in the background of the last panel can it be more bluer? because it looks like the sun is eating equestria
rainbowdash's wings yes very elegant but her wings are not exactly like that!
where are the clouds?
this is marvelous work dori-to very nice work indeed
The sonic rain-boom shows the impact that the big splash has on the pool.
I never imagined that Derpy would make such a big splash, because she is usually a very clumsy pony
I love it. I like the style you included and the detail of both the manes of the mares when in water. Also, the silhouette of Derpy shows that she, excuse the pun, was blown away. Love it
(This is my first Critique, so please don't hate
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