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Silly Lyra - The Plush-Off by Dori-to Silly Lyra - The Plush-Off by Dori-to
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Another con another comic! I just had to do something to remember my convention experience and seeing multiple clones of the plushies that I own going around sure was weird...


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:iconaurelleaheverfree:
I always look forward to these comics, your work is definitely enjoyable.

Vision: Not entirely sure what this means so I'm substituting this for style and intent. The ideas in this comic were concise, delivered well, overall. Love the little details like bonbon's cheek getting squished up against lyra's head, and the pulling up of lyra's mouth in the last pane. The addition of background silhouettes in the background, while subtle, totally add to the admosphere and make a huge difference.

Originality: I've yet to see this idea done, that counts for originality in my book :>

Technique: I get the feel of action lines very nicely in this piece. It definitely gives bonbon the sense of pulling on lyra as she tries to tug on lyra. Referencing the previous point, backgrounds were simple but effective. I feel that

Impact: I feel like the emotions couldve been slightly more exaggerated in the fifth pane in particular. The upper eyelid curves the same way as the lower one giving the impression she's either cold or tired. Wouldve helped to have it slant downward (upper most part towards the outside) to give her more of a threatening appearance.

Like I mentioned I always look forward to your stuff, you have a way of pulling off this style so well it's a pleasure to look at. I think if had to recommend anything to work on it would just be to be a tad more expressive, though I've seen from your previous works you definitely can do that :)
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:iconfierce-dities-link:
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2016
I love Lyra! X3
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:iconoscarelsnivykawai:
OscarElSnivyKawai Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2016
XD
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:iconlegacy-galaxy:
Legacy-Galaxy Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There's already a canon convention in this show. Do the words Daring Do bring anything to mind?
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
This was made before that episode aired. And things in this universe work a little differently.
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:iconfornogr:
ForNoGR Featured By Owner May 4, 2016
LOL well than
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:iconinterzen:
interzen Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016
Coming soon: Part II - The Plushening
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:iconmiragepotato:
MiragePotato Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Lywa is woing to will you
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:iconkatyscene:
KatyScene Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Me when I found out my friend Sinead had the exact same plushie I had which I was told was extremely rare. >w<
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:iconvrekandis:
Vrekandis Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016
I AM IMMORTAL
I HAVE INSIDE ME BLOOD OF KINGS...

:D
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
HEAR ME RAWR
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:iconkabhes:
kabhes Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2016
really princes con not something like human con or hobbit con?
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DarthSithis09 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
well i assume the artist was going with a con you could actually see being in the show..... where human obsessed lyra isn't canon and..... ..... hobbit con?? what... what is hobbit con.. lord of the rings?
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:iconkabhes:
kabhes Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2016
hobbit con because ponies are small horses and hobbits are small humans
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DarthSithis09 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
lol aaaaaaaaah
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VengefulStrudel Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That deathglare. xD Gotta love the Silly Lyra comics, heh. Great work :)
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:iconrobored:
RoboRed Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016
>"squeek"
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:iconsinister-aglets:
Sinister-Aglets Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016
Twi
Lit



Word!
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:icontigreanpony:
tigreanpony Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016
Lyra is such a silly pony. That was a great comic really find your style nice.
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Lyra too silly and thank you!
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
Well, it looks the same, but does it squeak? I bet he has an inferior plushie with no voice at all.

You should go over and educate him in what a proper plushie sounds like.
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Squeeky plushies master race!
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:iconjustjoeking:
JustJoeKing Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
O_o......
*goes to twilights castle and claims twilight*
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:iconsourspot:
SourSpot Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lyra's right, there can only be one. But that one has to be me! >:I
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
You are the one!
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:iconsourspot:
SourSpot Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gasp!
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:iconshadowbr0ny:
ShadowBr0ny Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
I want a TWI LIT t-shirt. xD
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Eey, someone noticed!
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:iconspb2015:
SPB2015 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
It's just a plushie, Lyra. No reason to get all hostile.
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:iconbeariot:
beariot Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
I was born 2,437 years ago. In that time, I've had three waifus. The last was Shikiko, a Japanese princess. Her father, Masamune, a genius, made this sword for me in 593 B.C. It is the only one of its kind... like his daughter. When Shikiko died, I was shattered. I would save you that pain. Please... let  Bon Bon go.
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:iconjyroman53:
jyroman53 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aye ! I know that sentence !
There can be only one!"
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:iconkabhes:
kabhes Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2016
that fits so perfectly with your profile photo
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:iconjyroman53:
jyroman53 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know right !
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:icongrogar-the-oneser:
Grogar-the-oneser Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
"Bonbon could you-"

"I'm not killing a guy for having the same guy."

"Who said, killing you could just cripple him."

"If i steal that doll will you let this go?"

"Maybe...."
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:iconeasle-darkpaws:
Easle-Darkpaws Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SOOOOOOOO CUTE
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:iconsolarheal9:
solarheal9 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
He was never seen again.....with that plushie. 
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:iconseether00:
Seether00 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
Does Twilight get a cut of the profits?
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
I bet all the profits go to Princess Celestia instead
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:iconsoulfulmirror:
SoulfulMirror Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your style is so unique.
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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EqDBot Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
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Sarxis Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
Nice vendor hall in the background!
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:iconkyoshyu:
Kyoshyu Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*squeak* :D
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:iconponyhd:
PonyHD Featured By Owner Edited Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really funny! Good JOB!  Way better than my idea ^^  ( We talked at the Con, if you remember )
Hope to see more from silly Lyra!  Love the Style!

Second: I think when the ears go up in the 4th panel, the hair should change the position too. ^^ Only error I found.   - The Hair looks wrong in panel 4, 5 & 6!
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Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! Good to hear from you! Yeah I know Lyra's ears and mane don't make much sense. But then again, she's a magic unicorn so where's the sense in that?

Also, I am totally using your ketchup idea for my next comic!
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:iconponyhd:
PonyHD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Using magic to skip the logic problem... can't argue with that! ^^   Btw: I wanted to watch your stream, but you mostly stream when I am working. (. -.) Maybe sometime! Have some free time the next weeks.  And thanks ^^, I can't wait for that comic! I am sure the people will love it!
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:iconcookiemoone:
CookieMoone Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
It's me! 
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:iconseriousjupiter:
SeriousJupiter Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
Silly Lyra, stop being so silly before you do something you'll regret later.
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
No regrets...
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SeriousJupiter Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016
Well, thank Celestia for Sweetie Drops, then.
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Redwing2411 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD that look on lyra's face in the last pane
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