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Party Of Two

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IT'S MY BIRTHDAY! And that means I should treat you to a comic! So, here it is!

Also, new style! I was starting to find my soft shading kind of awkward at times so I replaced it with harder colored shading. I am very pleased with the result and this will probably be the style for comics to come. Please tell me if you like it!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

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Critique by Mackenzie1234 Sep 19, 2013, 9:57:33 PM
I like it. This style of shading really makes the graphics pop, you know? Besides, this style really makes your art unique and distinct. This really is a good way to go for you, because straight up mlp artstyle in original fan fics can be easily be mistaken for vectors, and has a high chance of being passed by depending on who is scrolling down the page and glancing at your work. If I were you, I would build upon this originality and develop a radical way of doing mlp characters that sets you off from the rest of the pack.