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Cause tomorrow winter's is here

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Dori-to
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I always wondered what it would be like if all the snow fell at once, so I made this silly comic out if it...

Alternative ending: [link]

Also, I'm giving a prize to whoever can make a better alternative ending to this.
See the journal for more information:
Alternative Ending Competition!I had some troubles thinking of a proper ending for my latest comic and that gave me the idea to set out a little competition... Create the best alternative ending for my latest comic: Da Rulez - It has to be drawn - Any skill level will do, from stickfigures to mona lisa - No restriction on length, size, medium - No NSFW - Post your entry on your dA profile and link your deviation to me in a note Closing date: Thursday - November 22nd - 12am GMT Reward: I will be giving away a T-shirt of your choice from my collection: http://www.redbubble.com/people/dori-to Good luck everypony! :icondiscord-plz:
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Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Awesome comic think you could make it... well... make Dash's face a bit more detailed and i no it is a comic but i think it should look a little like the film and less like a... um... Simpson comic close up of face derpy and the snow and Twilights body and faces is alright it is just Dash's face, but her body is fine in detail and placement. The cutie marks are actuate and the castle. You got the clouds and the snow right... including the pony's wings and horns and everything but rainbow dashes face in the second slide

Excellent on detail and the bite mark in the snow <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>