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Cause tomorrow winter's is here by Dori-to Cause tomorrow winter's is here by Dori-to
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:iconbrony78:
Awesome Comic! The last panel somehow reminds me of Fairly OddParents...
But enough of that, onwards to the art! I love your style, simple, yet you combine shading, vectoring and cartoonism into the perfect mix, which makes a great comic. The designs are so cute, I could just eat them! (Not really)
The only thing I could criticize contructively, is thr lack of a Twilight on-liner. That would have been the peak, because the comic is funny, the end should be funny too, aside from the fun you've already inserted into it.
Overall, a great 9/10 for your awesome comic!
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:iconcjwolf1:
Awesome comic think you could make it... well... make Dash's face a bit more detailed and i no it is a comic but i think it should look a little like the film and less like a... um... Simpson comic close up of face derpy and the snow and Twilights body and faces is alright it is just Dash's face, but her body is fine in detail and placement. The cutie marks are actuate and the castle. You got the clouds and the snow right... including the pony's wings and horns and everything but rainbow dashes face in the second slide

Excellent on detail and the bite mark in the snow :) keep it up. :)
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:iconbeariot:
beariot Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2015
I think this comic inspired the show writers...
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:iconyolo-rainbowdash:
YOLO-RainbowDash Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
(second) Winter wrap up, winter wrap up!
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:icongen-silverchicken:
Gen-SilverChicken Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
If we wanted to be realistic, you guys do realize that all of that snow would have crushed at least the roofs of half of the buildings there. And ponies. And birds. and unprepared animals.
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:iconwarriors77495:
Warriors77495 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Derpy looks SOOO cute in the first panel!
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:iconyautjapony:
YautjaPony Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Makes a change XD
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:iconfrost-wind-mlp:
Frost-Wind-mlp Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
And then, ponies come and think they have discovered a grumpy purple-eyed snow with a horn.
I can imagine they're deception...
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:iconpug9gal:
pug9gal Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Student Photographer
awesome
got a good kick out of it!!
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:iconthelastmatureone:
thelastmatureone Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Twiligt's face at the end!
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
ahahaha!!! nice!
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:iconhakr14:
hakr14 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Reminds me of Bone.
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:iconnightwolf37:
nightwolf37 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
ha ha !
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:icon1992andbeyond:
1992andbeyond Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
Rainbow Dash: Blame it on the dog.

Derpy: What dog?

Rainbow Dash: The bird then?

Derpy: You mean the duck?

Rainbow: YES THE DUCK!!!

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:iconjazzylick:
JazzyLick Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
TWILIGHT'S FACE IN THE BOTTOM-X'DDD
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:iconsandwich-anomaly:
Sandwich-Anomaly Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and no one knows what went wrong... luckily it wasnt derpy's fault for once!
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:icongoldenponyz:
GoldenPonyZ Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
:icontwilightsparkleplz: :iconsaysplz: ...not this agian...
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:icongod2000zilla:
god2000zilla Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wouldn't that kill Twilight?

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:iconkristelpokemonfan:
kristelpokemonfan Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That face XD
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:iconominousprime7:
Ominousprime7 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
And then Derpy takes the blame. -_-
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:icongnikhcil:
gnikhcil Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
NOT DERPY FAULT!!!
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:iconbreezerogue63:
breezerogue63 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol lots of snow
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:iconivyleaf11:
ivyleaf11 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your work!!!
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!
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:icondaringmine:
DaringMine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol


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:iconspyrouk:
spyrouk Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:icontwilightsparkleplz: is thinking "what the buck?"
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:iconmylittleponytickles:
MyLittlePonyTickles Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconpinkiepieapprovesplz:
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:iconbeeblur:
Beeblur Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
:iconpinkieapprovesplz: I LIKE...
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:iconbre-ce-cuca:
Bre-Ce-Cuca Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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:iconclaythecrazydragon1:
claythecrazydragon1 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I like it! Unfortunately, the competition ended a long time ago.
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:iconclaythecrazydragon1:
claythecrazydragon1 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
I didn't care
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:iconfierce-dities-link:
Fierce-Dities-Link Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Rainbow Dash: Wow, for once it wasn't Ditzy's fault!
Ditzy/Derpy: I know, I don't know what went wrong?
Rainbow Dash: I know, right?
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:iconthunderblitz109:
ThunderBlitz109 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Winter Wrap up Winter Wrap up!
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:iconfluttershy87:
Fluttershy87 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
AWESOME! :D
@ Rainbow Dash: look who's telling who to be careful :P
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:iconapluu:
Apluu Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconumadtrollplz: You mad Twilight?
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:iconapluu:
Apluu Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconiseewhatyoudidhereplz: Oh RainbowDerp!
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:icondwproductions1:
DWproductions1 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013   General Artist
:iconsadrainbowdashplz::iconsaysplz:I just don't know what went wrong!
:iconangryderpyplz:
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Derpy: "Oops! Your bad!"
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:iconsaga529:
Saga529 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Yes "SNOW"
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:iconsaga529:
Saga529 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
thats what it is.
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:iconsooperevee:
sooperevee Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student General Artist
'be careful, derpy' says the one who hits the snow lever and covered ponyville in snow.
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:icondominoes007:
dominoes007 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I have special eyes...
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:iconobsidiandovah:
Obsidiandovah Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Le wild lever appear!
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:iconkiranta:
Kiranta Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
:iconderpyhoovesplz:: Yes! About time somepony else screwed up for a change.
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:iconcandycanetiger:
Candycanetiger Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaha. twlilght!
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:iconmariokid97:
MarioKid97 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Does anyone else think of that one scene in Bone when Phone Bone was walking through the forest in the first book and was warned of the coming winter when the snow fell like it did in this comic seconds later? Good times :)
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:iconprincesstsparkle:
PrincessTSparkle Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
Why is this always happening to ME. At least now I have wings
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:icondori-to:
Dori-to Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yay! All hail Princess Sparkle!
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:iconmickey-the-luxray:
Mickey-the-Luxray Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Calvin's magnum opus dream.
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:iconshadowofademon88:
ShadowofaDemon88 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Rainbow Dash has no idea what went wrong.....shrugs
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:icontamalesyatole:
tamalesyatole Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This comic just got more relevant this past saturday :D
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