Just a couple of things:
- This comic takes place after Applejack has come back from Manehattan, that's why she already has her cutie mark.
- And for those that argue that Winona couldn't breath in the box; Big Mac did poke holes in the wrapping paper, he's a clever stallion.
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Let's start with the vision. I absolutely love this comic with every piece of my body. The unique vision you were able to describe with both age gap between siblings and the thrill of your first pet both again are very heartwarming.
Let's move on to the next category: Originality. I dont think Winona's ever been given an origin story, so +A for that. I also think that AJ and Big Mac's relationship is covered very much in the show. Showing them in adolescence was a really brilliant idea.
Next, technique. Very fitting of your style. Thick outlines and detailed coloring. Nice work.
Finally, Impact. I have yet to see it on the frontpage of Reddit or on EqD (Sending and posting now XP).
Again, great piece. Even when you're famous, you still find a way to push your art and your style and make great art.
Keep it up
While the story was cute there was little to no buildup which made the actual "D'awwwwww" moment feel lacking
The perspective, mainly in the second panel threw me for a loop as it just felt "Off". I couldn't tell whether the farm was 3 feet or 300 feet away. The final bit is that as a whole there felt to be too much "Dark space". the areas between the panels were FAR to large and that irked me to no end.
All in all this comic was a fun read but if you seriously want to get better, this is every flaw i could find.
she looks sooo cute
the dog I mean
aww how sweet of him