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Submitted: October 26, 2012
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Big Mac Best Friend Foreverby *Dori-to

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Comics / Strips

My friend

made my dream come true and gave me a Fluttershy plushie. To thank him I made a comic featuring his favourite pony; Applejack.

Just a couple of things:
- This comic takes place after Applejack has come back from Manehattan, that's why she already has her cutie mark.
- And for those that argue that Winona couldn't breath in the box; Big Mac did poke holes in the wrapping paper, he's a clever stallion.

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Critique by ~Rainbowsuperfan Dec 13, 2012, 7:33:22 AM

this is probblay the most sweetest comic ever. awwwww Apple Jack looks downright overall cuute! i dont know what else to say. no really its saying write more or it wont be published.Meh i will just blahblah blah blah OH LETS JUST FORGET THIS. er right other things to say... oooh i know i know i er love how you have made a comic about how Apple Jack got her sheep dog er whats his name again? Anywho i find nice that you made it for a nice friend of yours who got you something you really wanted.

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Critique by ~Classical-Brony Oct 27, 2012, 6:23:18 AM

Serious critique, no more of that 5 star all around BS
While the story was cute there was little to no buildup which made the actual "D'awwwwww" moment feel lacking
The perspective, mainly in the second panel threw me for a loop as it just felt "Off". I couldn't tell whether the farm was 3 feet or 300 feet away. The final bit is that as a whole there felt to be too much "Dark space". the areas between the panels were FAR to large and that irked me to no end.
All in all this comic was a fun read but if you seriously want to get better, this is every flaw i could find.