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A Hot Topic by Dori-to A Hot Topic by Dori-to
It's been a while since my last comic...

So, time to upload some new stuff! Enjoy!
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Critique by Icydoesminecraft Aug 29, 2013, 12:43:41 PM
Well, First things first, This is my first critique.
1st panel. Perfect. shading is very nice. I could clearly see where the light was coming from. although, How come pinkie's bowl seems to have something spilled on it.
2nd panel. The way you showed how spike threw the wasabi seems too thick.
4rth panel. Where's spikes crest?
5th panel. Spike seems to be standing at the edge of the table. But in the 1st panel he was standing next to twilight and pinkie pie.
7th panel. Absoulutly halairious! It's just that I feel that celestia's hair seems to be above her head a little too high.
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Yes it's funny.
Spike's face in the third panel is great. But nor quite perfect like you would screw your face up and spazz out.
Oh and pinkiepie was great. Just the sort of crule funny thing she would do.
Shading was nice, art style is quite nice. The choice of sushi was mediocre I guess
and who knew ponies liked sushi? That's a new one.
Spikes reaction accept the fact that he burped. It would have been funnier if he just sort of went "blarg" but I don't know really.
Also Celestias face at the end sums up perfectly how she would react to this.
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mlplover9100 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
lol
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JezzaRat Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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JDMiles Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
Do not eat the pistachio ice cream! It has turned!!
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SonicCam04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  New member
wow cars 2 refrence
never been done before
i am clapping nowClapping Pony Icon - Pinkie Pie 
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Sparkyhasacupcake64 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  New member
Poor spike XD
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RubyStardust Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist
Marshall D. Teach One Piece Blackbeard (Emoticon) Request: Blink Icon E'ma Look Of Dissaproval 
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Porygone-fishing Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
:icontowmaterplz::iconsays1plz: I'll take some of that there Pistachio Ice Cream! 
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SonicCam04 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  New member
thats what i thought
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Zury254958 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
XD
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lollipopflower Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Bye spike see you on the moon!
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