Well, First things first, This is my first critique. 1st panel. Perfect. shading is very nice. I could clearly see where the light was coming from. although, How come pinkie's bowl seems to have something spilled on it. 2nd panel. The way you showed how spike threw the wasabi seems too thick. 4rth panel. Where's spikes crest? 5th panel. Spike seems to be standing at the edge of the table. But in the 1st panel he was standing next to twilight and pinkie pie. 7th panel. Absoulutly halairious! It's just that I feel that celestia's hair seems to be above her head a little too high.
Yes it's funny. Spike's face in the third panel is great. But nor quite perfect like you would screw your face up and spazz out. Oh and pinkiepie was great. Just the sort of crule funny thing she would do. Shading was nice, art style is quite nice. The choice of sushi was mediocre I guess and who knew ponies liked sushi? That's a new one. Spikes reaction accept the fact that he burped. It would have been funnier if he just sort of went "blarg" but I don't know really. Also Celestias face at the end sums up perfectly how she would react to this.
It's wasabi, a traditional Japanese paste made from a plant of the same name. It is not generally eaten for its flavor, but for the sensation.When eaten, it has a sensation similar to that of horseradish, stimulating the nasal cavities and sinuses, but is much stronger. I, personally, love wasabi. It's by far my favorite condiment. And yes, it is a condiment.
It's not a dish, its a condiment. Sorry if I come off as snide, but I'm Japanese and find it annoying how little people seem to understand the culture. Sure I'm no expert, but at least I know that sushi is Japanese, not Chinese.
Hay, I'm only a quarter Japanese, but I did live in Okinawa for about six years, and my dad pushes the culture quite a bit. It's kinda annoying how often I get asked if I know Japanese. I do not. While I lived on Okinawa, it was on an American Air Force base. Everyone spoke English. Thanks for the watch, but I'm not sure what good it'll do. I don't make any art, and I don't know any of the other site features. If you have a fimfiction account, that's were you're gonna want to follow me, if at all. I don't write either. I do edit though. If you write, I'd love to help out. Dang, I went on a tangent there.
Bassline and Melody. If you find me, let me know who you are. Another thing you should probably know, Bassline and Melody are two OCs, and I often get in character with them. I really only talk to others as myself when the people I'm talking to are my friends. So, unless the circumstances require me to be in character, such as in a thread for a group that I run, I'll be talking as myself to you. One last thing, you can call me Z.